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posted 1/26/2007 4:02:05 PM |
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Just some sappy poetry I just finished. It started as a song but the prose got wierd for the chords I had written....So I switched it around and made a poem...Anyway see what you think.... ( Covers head and waits for rotten fruit to be thrown)

************Eachother's Happy Ending*********

This fairy tale begins in a western land…. with a boy who sells his soul through the music in his hands
Long now he's walked in darkness, searching for the path……. and the quest has taken from him almost everything he has
He's held hands with tragedy and made love to despair…mad passion held his body down but his dreams still danced on air
He didn't know where she was …he doesn't care where she's been….he knows where they both can go…join hearts , the magic begins….

It doesn't matter about the dangers on the road….you face it down together and see where it goes
Close your eyes and open your heart…what you find there is worth winning…It was clear from the Beginning….We are eachothers Happy Ending

Little flower in a world of roses……. she doesn't even know… until he kissed her soul… she had never been told
She was worth the many trials, that have made him all he can be…..her love is the only prison, where inside he can be free
She is the dream from which he never wakes……. and the night in which he never sleeps
She is a bag full of wishes and a pocket full of dreams….She loves me…..she loves me not… he a Beggar or a King?

It doesn't matter about the dangers on the road….you face it down together and see where it goes
Close your eyes and open your heart…..what you find there is worth winning…It was clear from the Beginning…We are eachothers Happy Ending

He hasn't been everything to her, that he knows how to be…He's wandered blind for so long now, he'd forgotten how to see
He knows how to give her everything, if she doesn't run and hide…the pleasure of finding treasure is not the box it's what's inside
He can fulfill all her dreams, if she'll only fall asleep….He'll be her sky endless blue….her man forever true….her river running forever deep
He is the key to happiness, that belongs to her forevermore…..but she has to turn the key…she has to open up the door

It doesn't matter about the dangers on the road…You face it down together and see where it goes
Close your eyes and open your heart…..What you find there is worth winning…..It was clear from the beginning…We are eachothers Happy Ending

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Jan 26 @ 4:07PM  
Actually it's not that bad. It needs a little polishing but otherwise OK. No rotten fruit from me on this one

Jan 26 @ 4:12PM  
I like it!! and on accout of You da man.. one of these too

Jan 26 @ 4:17PM  
I'd need to hear it with music...

Jan 26 @ 4:20PM  
I like it!!

Jan 26 @ 4:21PM  
I chucked out the song idea for it...the lyrics got too strange and complicated....I'll use the music for something else...always recycle

Jan 26 @ 4:23PM  
Personally, I believe you should write a ballad for your first girl!!!

Jan 26 @ 4:29PM  
"Ode to PrincessKissy"...or "Kissy on my Mind" wait....classy ..."The Royalty of a Kiss"....I'll work on'm scared of your broom and machete if I don't...

Jan 26 @ 4:31PM  
OMG.... that got a real, deep BELLY laugh out of me!!!

Jan 26 @ 4:35PM  
it's really very nice for a hopeless romantic like me.

Jan 26 @ 5:55PM  
You chucked the music? I'm hearing something for the chorus bit, hows your range? Is A to high?

Jan 26 @ 8:27PM  

I think it's very good. keep it up.

Jan 27 @ 12:01AM  
Canu my man!...Yeah man we can go in A...the stuff I had originaly was in G but I can do either...Hell we can even transpose it to another key if it ain't right ...I ain't hard to

Jan 27 @ 12:03AM  
NightofOld......Thanx man....I consider it high praise coming from you

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