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posted 1/23/2007 9:07:27 AM |
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The man I loved he loved me too
he held me close at night
and when the world closed in on me
he somehow made things right
he'd smile across a crowded room
my heart would skip a beat
my work was perfect then because
i knew he'd never cheat
I felt our love so strong and true
would last through eternity
i laighed at fate not knowing
the last laugh would be on me
for now my world has ended
my life is torn apart
the sun is gone now from my days
the soul gone from my heart
you tell me you still love me
"I'm Sorry" is what you said
but i dont think i can love the man you are
the man i loved is dead

Gloria Taylor

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wtxman

Jan 23 @ 9:24AM  
Just when I was starting to feel better......
ynot7769

Jan 23 @ 9:43AM  
bummer
BigFlirt

Jan 23 @ 9:53AM  
That was sad....but good....
NightOfOld

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Jan 23 @ 10:51AM  

Story of my life.
mike_mike73

Jan 23 @ 10:56AM  
Very sad poem but a very good one.
WykedMommy165

Jan 23 @ 11:03AM  
Did you date my last boyfriend? I think that was about him.

Very nice work!
tlc0766

Jan 23 @ 11:10AM  
damn it STOP these are making me cry!!
sidetrippn

Jan 23 @ 11:15AM  
I'm the kind of guy you're lamenting about. I've left the seat up too.
joltman20

Jan 23 @ 12:16PM  
Dominus

Jan 23 @ 2:33PM  
A lot of people don't seem to understand you can't play with people as though they were dolls of clay. You cannot mold them thinking you're not having influence, and you cannot break them feeling you will not have repercussions.

I have rarely broken a heart, but when I did so it was never with intention. And even then I understood that once you do so you change your relationship forever. There is no going back.
zena343

Jan 23 @ 2:56PM  
Great poem oohwa, how true, sometimes sorry is just not enough, and when it is said too often, it no longer means anything at all.

Zena

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