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  Looking4ever

OH! NO SHE DIDN'T? Yes, I did...I tried my hand at erotica....
posted 5/6/2007


This is a first attempt....


We met online. Doesn’t everyone these days? We talked a little on IM and it soon became phone conversations. Mostly those were getting to know each other, nothing sexual. Hell, even though we found each other on a ‘dating site’, and everyone ‘knows' that it’s all about sex, little of our conversations strayed to that arena. But, late one night, it was different. Slowly the conversation became erotic. Wow, could he talk the talk. He had me so turned on, craving his hands on my body. I wanted him doing the things he told me he wanted to do to my body. I wanted it so bad. He lived some distance away, just far enough that it would take about 1.5 hours to get here. Circumstances were such that we couldn’t make it happen that night. Or was it my inner ‘good girl’ telling me (screaming at me?) that I couldn’t do such a thing? Well, whatever it was, we didn’t meet that night. Sure, we shared a couple of mutual orgasms over the phone but lately those had become unfulfilling. Having sex with myself and my selection of toys had become mundane. Sure, the orgasms were good but it had become an all too familiar routine that I was tiring of. I wanted to feel another’s hands on me. I wanted his hot breath on my face, my back, my thighs. I wanted. Yes, I did.

The next morning, I couldn’t get him from my thoughts. I thought of what he said the night before. It was on my mind all day. My body could almost feel him. It had to feel him. I threw caution to the wind and called him that evening to see if he was still interested in meeting up. I’d say! He arrived an hour and 15 minutes later. I barely had time to shower and shave. My hair was still slightly damp. I was wearing a silky nightie and matching robe. I had only lit a few candles…in part to hide my nerves and maybe to hide him…did I really want to be disappointed at this point? I heard him pull up in the drive. The butterflies in my stomach were going crazy. Was it too late to not do this? Was this what I really wanted to do? Was I crazy? What if he turned out to be some freak? A mental case? A killer? Thankfully he knocked on the door and I had no time left to let my imagination run wild anymore. I opened the door and said hi. He said nothing. In the low light coming from the place next door, he indeed looked like his picture. Mature yet sweet. The boy next door. Blonde and tall. Nicely built, maybe slightly out of shape. Nice. I stepped back so he could enter my house. Still, he said nothing. He just shut the door and then roughly grabbed me. He planted a hungry kiss on me, taking me by surprise. He pulled me to him almost savagely, my feet leaving the ground. He was more than a foot taller than me and he obviously didn’t feel the need to bend down that far to plant his lips on mine. My head swam. I forgot all reason. At some point he released me from that mind blowing kiss and set my feet back on the ground but he didn’t let go of me yet. He steadied me, holding on to my elbows. He looked me in the eyes, smiled his charming smile (oh, I am a sucker for a great smile!) and said, “Hi, I’m Todd…”

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Blueyesprkln

Jun 28 @ 10:00PM  
Great story Looking. Just as good as the first time you posted it. Thanks for the effort, I likie. lol
Taisen

Jun 28 @ 10:01PM  
Good job, looking forward to reading more.
NightOfOld

Jun 28 @ 10:02PM  

You met her in a chat room as Kate 26
Laughed and confided, you even shared pics.
This message is posted to tell Kate is away,
She has morphed into someone quite different today !!!

You will find her in chat rooms as wildgentlebreeze
Her hormones are raging, quite hard to please
She's cutting, sarcastic and sometimes quite lewd,
Not at all like the Kate 26 that you knew !!!

The seasons change less than Kate 26 moods
Sometimes she's a cartoon, at others a nude.
With each different picture she changes her name,
Don't take it personal, it is part of her game.

Sometimes she is funny, flirtatious and fat,
At others real lonely and missing her cat.
She is friendly or furious, on Mondays she's meek,
At least five different people by the end of the week !!

On Tuesday she has kids on Wednesday there's none,
Cause this is the night Kate 26 has her fun.
She is hetro and mono, bi and is gay,
This isn't confusing, it just depends on the day !!!!

On Fridays real sporty, off with the crowd,
On Saturdays dancing with music played loud.
She climbed mountains and sailed, loved and she lost,
Went riding on horseback, took drugs and smoked pot !!

Lived in Perth and Kentucky, sometimes as a bot,
Lived in cold snowy places, others quite hot.
But the truth to be known; ask if you dare,
Kate 26 never moved from her chair !!!!!!!!

And I guess that's the magic of internet chat,
Some people are honest, some wear different hats.
So remember behind clever names on the screen,
There are people there typing who are not what they seem !!

And as for your new friend, young Kate 26,
She looks nothing like that sexy young chic.
Though her mind is still sharp, her fingers move quick,
She probably thinks you're a bit of a Dick !!!

She has four grown children, she's old and is grey,
Re- living her youth in a 'virtual' way.
To find the real person, I'm sorry to say,
It's a pity but matey ____ You picked the WRONG DAY !!!!

soft_touch938

Jun 28 @ 11:53PM  
Playing catch-up here...YES do finish it....I'm waiting......
soft_touch938

Jun 28 @ 11:54PM  
Oh, I forgot....Chuck, what a poem...loved it!
Blueyesprkln

Jun 28 @ 11:58PM  
And yes finish the story, a kudo for it and wish I could give a Kudo for Night, great poem.
selectusername

Jun 29 @ 12:48AM  
Very nice, I would like to read more. If you need more material,

I'll be in Indiana next week!
Looking4ever

Jun 29 @ 1:00AM  
If you need more material,

I'll be in Indiana next week!

Really? Next week? Where? When? Seriously?

All in the name of research, of course....
lunanegra

Jun 29 @ 1:14AM  
Careful,posting this would make you a sick,perverted deviate...
theSkwirl

Jun 29 @ 12:36PM  
I'm glad she's a sick .. summin .. deviant! Makes the world a happier place. We should all be deviants!!!!

Soooo... when ya gonna finish your story? I'm waaaaaaaaaaaiting.. yeah I know you are waiting for me to write one too and I'm workin on it..I swear.. but mine will only be slightly smutty.

I'm giving you a cookie but you gotta give Chuck the crumbs k?
Mike7m

Jul 19 @ 11:58AM  
Absolutely you should finish this, you write very well, drawing the reader in and getting them eager to follow along as the carnal pleasures unfold

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