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She Touched Me

posted 4/23/2009 8:55:37 PM |
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  aspiringwriter

The Skwirl issued a challenge a bit ago to do a blog off the title "he/she touched me." Anyway, here's a poem, more or less off the top of my head (read not that great) by way of picking up the gauntlet.

Wooed by the Wind
======================
She touched me
her hand
accidentally touching mine
like a dream
her touch
a memory to hold
a memory that vanishes
in an instant
a zephyr
wafting across my mind

She gazes at me
her eyes
a flame under crystal glass
incandescent
her eyes
holding on to me
with a casual glance
does she know
she's a squall
blowing me over

She smiles at me
her grin
playfully dances
across her face
her smile
a simple politeness
or an intrigue
in a glance
hurricanes
rip through my mind

She stops and turns
I want to speak
I find I can't
she blows a kiss
I waft away

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DarkKnightWalking

Apr 23 @ 11:46PM  
Not bad.
aspiringwriter

Apr 24 @ 12:45AM  
Thanks for the comment.
hornymanalways

Apr 24 @ 12:54AM  
Yep not bad....
themama

Apr 24 @ 12:57AM  
Not bad at all...
onehornytoad69

Apr 24 @ 3:36AM  

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