I thought this was appropriate to repost this weekend. I read it to a crowd of almost 200 who packed a downtown bar at Crab Festival last night for our Annual Poetry Event.
I wrote this in 8 days while the wall was here in June 2006. It was recorded and has a streaming version available at my local public radio station www.kmxt.org.
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The Moving Wall (Final Edition) DAY ONE
It has traveled widely across this land On Kodiak Island it now stands The Moving Wall, in Baranof Park For seven days, through dawn and dark
The names are etched upon the wall Family, friends, strangers come to call To view the names of loved ones lost The Vietnam War's tremendous cost
Too many reasons for why they're here To say goodbye, to shed a tear Solace, closure, a state of grace Conflicting emotions on every face
A smiling woman scans the book She finds the name for which she looks Her legs buckle where she stands Overwhelmed by sobs and shaking hands
A volunteer stands by in a yellow vest Providing aid, comfort, and a place to rest Open ears and understanding shrugs Receptive arms, tissues, lots of hugs
A brother comes to walk the wall Amid the list of fifty-eight thousand souls He finds the name of the one he seeks He returns from the field in silence, he cannot speak
A group of students, about high school age Come into the tent to view a page Such young minds, an impact expressed Questions they asked left me impressed
A young man was turned away today It was Frisbee on the field he wanted to play While meaning no intentional disrespect He showed no regard for those it would affect
DAY TWO
After the opening ceremony, began the roll call Of the names that are honored on the Memorial Wall Continuing day and night until every name has been read In solemn remembrance, for the ones now dead
A friend recently visited the wall in DC A name listed too high there to imprint her honoree Tonight I rubbed him here onto a precious slip In tomorrows post, out it will ship
I met a woman out there in the rain She told me that walking the wall was easing her pain So many she knew had given their life Many had left when she was a young wife
Comments recorded, printed in ink Caused me to cry and made me think Pages filled with gratitude, pain and sorrow within Healing emotional scars can now begin
DAY THREE
A volunteer comes to read war's claims Real people remembered, not faceless names Emotions run high as with blurred sight He fights back tears, must do it right
The wall stands black, sleek and proud Rain drizzles down, nature’s solemn shroud Panels numbered from center out, east and west To aid those who seek loved ones on their quest
Two young girls return to ask what the emblems mean A simple cross in front for those still not seen Diamonds displayed for those now confirmed The ones we know that will never return
A father brings his sons to see To honor those who fought to keep them free Children learn things they are too young to know About this war from long ago
Pools of tears well up in a mother’s eyes as she places kisses Tenderly upon the names of the ones she misses A smile appears as she turns her face Words of thanks for bringing them home to this place
Veterans come to grieve in the dead of the night To say goodbye to comrades fallen in this fight Seeking closure, solitude, emotional release Without the crowds to disturb their peace
A couple walks the wall, their hands combined Clutching a list of names they hope to find A name located, they turn and embrace each other Then they return to their search for yet another
A man he kneels before a name Fingers tracing it over and over again He whispers to me in a shaky voice It should have been me, if I’d had a choice
DAY FOUR
A woman came to find one she has missed He was the first boy she ever kissed His name rubbed she took today A cherished memory to tuck away
A sister and her brother looked so sad Grown kids who never knew their Dad They came to the wall on Father's Day To touch his name and quietly pray
Silence fills the park once more As the last name is called from this terrible war Tears glisten in the eyes as the reader calls The last lost soul listed upon the wall
An angry man curses why they fell Still tormented in a private hell He wrings his hands, trying to express his grief Years of time having offered no relief
DAY FIVE
One woman comes by every day Her head bowed down as she prays A silent vigil that she keeps For all the men here in their untimely sleep
Veterans hug, some stand proud and tall Brought together by the wall Battle tales of fallen comrades they share Long lost friends, reunited here
A man comes to ease his pain Tears on his face hidden by the rain He turns to the wall in silent tribute And offers up a reverent salute
DAY SIX
Daylight fades as darkness creeps Most of the town lay now asleep Illuminated beams cast soft do show Names on the wall begin to glow
Bathed in a rain softened haze of artificial light A shadow companion emerges from the night Where a lone volunteer walks in the early morn Two men step now before first dawn
Stars and Stripes flying proud and free Whipping on the pole in the cool night breeze In majestic beauty lit up after dark To stand its stately watch here in this park
DAY SEVEN
This day begins as more names are read Honoring the current Iraq War’s dead In strong winds our flag proudly flies Bold contrast against overcast skies
A lady brings her class reunion book It was for six names I helped her look Only three she found in the lists we had Three precious rubbings that made her glad
Crowds gather around to be addressed Closing words and thanks expressed People watch with hands on hearts Colors being struck by the Honor Guards
On the longest day, the time has come The wall’s Kodiak tour is now done For all the lives it went out to touch To this small community it meant so much
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