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posted 3/1/2008 2:05:08 PM |
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  xdcfx

OK, This is gonna be the last poem I put in my blogs here, at AMD. It has been said from a few, that "Poems from guys is not "manly" However, I am NOT and I repeat NOT here for guys, so my feelings on that, is if you dont think so, "Shit in your hat" I have made a pretty good living on what you may call "GAY" I'm not gonna say who it was that said this to me, so dont ask. The only reason I am even doing this one today, is because I had already planned to for today. But I want to thank you all that have left me kind words in my blog comments for the poems that I have put in here. You are all to kind, and I am glad that some of you have enjoyed them.

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"THE WAY THAT I AM"
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YOU ARE MY FRIEND, OR ARE YOU MY FOE

ITS NOT HARD TO FIGURE, JUST SO YOU KNOW

I HEAR ALL THOSE THINGS, YOU SAY TO MY FRIENDS

STILL I MUST QUESTION, WHY THEY WERE SAID

THEY COME AND THEY TELL ME, THESE THINGS ALL THE TIME

THESE WORDS ARE YOURS, AND SOMETIMES ARE MINE

I DONT FEEL I DESERVE, THIS TREATMENT OF YOURS

I DONT THINK YOU CAN HEAR ME, BEHIND THESE CLOSED DOORS

ITS HARD NOT TO FEEL, THE SAME WAY YOU DO

BUT I DONT TELL PEOPLE, THE THINGS THAT YOU DO

I KEEP ALL MY FEELINGS, ALL TO MYSELF

I TUCK THEM AWAY, HIGH ON A SHELF

I WISH I WAS OPEN, AND COULD TAKE SUCH A STAND

WHEN THEY TELL ME YOU LOVE ME, THE WAY THAT I AM

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gwenafar

Mar 1 @ 2:14PM  
That was beautiful...and let me tell you something...Who gives two shits what anyone says about your poetry hun?!!! It is yours; your talent, your thoughts....You own that and no one can take it away. I love reading them. And if people don't appreciate it then they can read on. Don't let anyone bully you into taking down that which gives some of us alot of pleasure. You rock!
Ewe_Wish

Mar 1 @ 2:18PM  
Awesome...............as for gay.......I dont think so.......some of my favorite poets are male Robert Frost for one...........maybe this will help you out

1. The Road Not Taken


TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.



You keep writing and posting..........someone dont like it..........they can go read something else or write their own.......you have just as much right to put in a blog anything you want as well as everyone else on this site............


casuallylooking

Mar 1 @ 2:23PM  
Nice...as usual.
As far as whoever told you that...........who did it ..who did it? No, seriously, I am kidding. I don't care, and as long as you are secure in who you are and the words are true.........you shoudn't either. Regardless.

I'll be honest and say I am not in the mood to read poetry everyday. But when I am, it makes no difference to me who wrote it. I pay attention to the words and allow them to take me where my mind lets them take me. If a man can write beautiful poetry.....I say , do it.
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 2:27PM  
Yes I do know, and appreciate that most of you do enjoy them, and I thank you very much for that. You have all been very kind but, I am not here to make waves, cause problems, or be pointed out for negitivity.
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 2:29PM  
Ewe Robert Frost is also one of my favorites. I have always looked at his work as a direction of mine.

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village, though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there's some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

Robert Frost
itsallforfun

Mar 1 @ 2:29PM  
That was wonderful I have really enjoyed your poems and will be sorry if you dont post anymore but i can understand the reason why.
onehornytoad69

Mar 1 @ 2:39PM  
Do what ya wanna do, dude!!!
If U only had One Fan... than it would be worth it!!! Fugg the rest!!!!
My 2 cents!!!!
mochi

Mar 1 @ 2:42PM  
Write your poems bro
forget the rest
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 2:46PM  
Oh I didnt say I was going to stop writing poems. I just said I wasnt putting them here in my blogs anymore.
CrazyCraveman

Mar 1 @ 2:55PM  
Then I too must not be "manly" And I guess I must be "gay" Because I happen to like it!

This ass clown, whoever he or she is/was...reminds me of something my father had said to me many years ago...

Real men don't cry...

I simply looked up at him, and I told him...

If that's part of what it takes to be a "real man." One who doesn't cry, then I don't ever want to be a "real man."

And here's one of those worthless kudos...for whatever the hell everyone is using them for these days...
dusk2dawn321

Mar 1 @ 3:15PM  
I do not get all poetry, but I enjoy yours. Its good to know that not all blogs refer to sex. Its good to see some that are just written not for sex, but to make a person see the world though anothers eyes. And your eyes are beautiful.
lolthisistoofunny

Mar 1 @ 3:24PM  
Who's the idiot who said poems from guys are not manly? Some of the most famous poets of all time were men.
Ewe_Wish

Mar 1 @ 3:25PM  
You posted my other favorite ones of Robert Frost..........that is such a pretty one.....my mom often quoted that poem when someone would tease her about dying said she couldnt die cause she had promises to keep and miles to go before shed sleep thank you..............
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 3:58PM  
Ewe That is my favorite poem of all times, It reminds me of when my brother and I went riding his horses for miles through the woods one warm winter day, while out on the trails, it had gotten cold real fast. and it had started to snow real hard. We could hardly see where we were going and the horses were getting real freaked too. It actually started to scare me. about four hours later him and I made it back to the house. "God rest his soul."
sumdaysoon

Mar 1 @ 4:23PM  
dude post all the poetry you want.........i read it........guess that makes gay too huh...........
StraddleMyNose

Mar 1 @ 5:30PM  
Who cares what people think. Post anything you want!
DarkDesires99

Mar 1 @ 6:14PM  
Be yourself and don’t listen to any naysayers.
Write what you want!!!!
(PS if you are writing poetry they probability think your getting to much attention from the women and they want to up their odds by cutting you down.)

CrazyCraveman

Mar 1 @ 6:41PM  
(PS if you are writing poetry they probability think your getting to much attention from the women and they want to up their odds by cutting you down.)

Excellent point DarkDesires99

And I was saying to Thom thru a few e-mails we've sent to each other...I think it has mostly to do with the fact that...

Many men are so insecure with their own manhood, that they have to make fun of, or say things such as a man isn't "manly" or is "gay" simple because he doesn't, in their eyes...do things that are not "manly" or "gay."
NachoBaby

Mar 1 @ 6:53PM  
Whoa.. fuck those guys in the ear and tell em hell yeah I'm gay.. far happier than you are cuz the ladies are PAYING ATTENTION TO ME!!

Dumbass..

I like your poetry XD and I don't find it unmanly.. the dude that said that was just fuckin jealous cuz .. WE LIKE IT!

greybeard55

Mar 1 @ 7:01PM  
I think you write well and if someone doesn't like it, tough shit.. Then don't read it.
Be true to yourself.
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 7:02PM  
I understand that, and I love that some of you enjoy it. I really do. It dont bother me that they think its "gay," I could give two shits what they think. The point is, I dont want my work put out there as fuel for anyone to start shit over. I see myself as a problem solver, eliminate the problem, just wont post them here anymore. As far as the guys who have said this to me, think of how "gay" it is the next time you buy someone an AVANTI greating card. I just may have been the one that wrote it.
ladybootscooter

Mar 1 @ 7:16PM  
I don't give a flying rodents posterior region what they say! I for one will miss them! And I've bought many Avanti cards, so now I know some of the talent! Woo Hoo!
Hey here's an idea, you could add your "fans" to your friend list, post poems in bulletins.........those of us that truly appreciate won't call you funny names!!!
Shiny green fat free kudo to ya!
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 8:03PM  
Hey here's an idea, you could add your "fans" to your friend list, post poems in bulletins.........those of us that truly appreciate won't call you funny names!!!

Wow your a problem solver too... I think thats a great idea, and dont hve a problem with tht at all.
ladybootscooter

Mar 1 @ 8:14PM  
You know as soon as you people realize how brilliant I really am things will go much smoother around here!! Just kidding! But I do have my moments of clarity now and then!!!!
xdcfx

Mar 1 @ 8:40PM  
lmao Yeah, I have seen a few of them moment
soft_touch938

Mar 1 @ 8:49PM  
<-----me me me...can I be on your friends list? Please Please Please???

I love poetry and write it and sometimes post it. I know how you feel, I really do. My poems mostly come from deep in my heart and have meaning to me. They are like my "babies"....I gave them life and then have someone criticize them or carp about 'another poem'....it's hurtful and truthfully it pisses me off. Who died and left them the poetry critic??? Or for that matter the keeper of what is blogged on AMD?? No sir!!! Don't let them steal away from you the freedom to post whatever you want.

I hate to see you stop posting them but I do understand why. But I don't wanna miss them so...please please please????
Ewe_Wish

Mar 1 @ 9:15PM  
You know as soon as you people realize how brilliant I really am things will go much smoother around here!!
Man are we screwed now......................... Almost makes you wonder when her head gets that inflated how she will get thru the door way doesnt it? Just teasing Stomry girl................


Pick me pick me for your friends list too..........
ladybootscooter

Mar 2 @ 12:36AM  
Just so ya'll know, it's hours later and my hats still fit!!!!! See Dayna my head doesn't swell nearly as bad as my damn ankles do sitting here at the puter!!!
casuallylooking

Mar 2 @ 1:11AM  
you could add your "fans" to your friend list, post poems in bulletins..
that would work...well on the days I remember to read the bulletins, that is.
xdcfx

Mar 2 @ 3:58AM  
probably better that you add me

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