Since it seems to be Poetry and Story day here I guess I'll jump right in So, I should start by explaining that I have never really thought of myself as the type to write poetry. I like all kinds of poetry but never thought I was capable of writing any. That is till I stumbled onto Xanga. You know, its like Myspace but not. Anyway here is a sample then I will explain:
Sun bursts out from behind snow covered branches. Blinding in it's beauty. Momentarily warming the skin despite the temps. Well, I never said it was brilliant
See, this all started when a gf of mine said I had to go on Xanga cause she was there, blah, blah, blah. So I did. Needless to say she never posts anything on there but I thought it was kinda fun, so I put up a few things.
Anyhoo, they have this thing called pulse and you only get something like 125 spaces to leave a quick message to friends.
I have no idea why I did it but I started using it to describe things. I found it a challenge to say what I wanted with the limited space.
And now I think of it as my Pulse Poetry. Simple isn't it
So, here are a few more cause I knoooooow y'all really want to read it
Morning rituals_coffee_take a seat_a sip_look out the windows_towards the mountains_sun sneaks out between the peaks_beauty
Snowed yesterday, today there is a icy misty fog. You look out the window and want to wipe away the frost. There is none :)
Peace..the sound of it is gentle, soothing...the feel of it, like being wrapped in loving arms..the cost of it? Your heart. Thanks for reading!!
Love, Laughter, Peace and Blessings!! Z
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DarkKnightWalking

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Feb 28 @ 8:27PM
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I like that.
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NachoBaby

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Feb 28 @ 9:21PM
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hmm you got more than a few more? Cuz I really WOULD like to read it! You have a knack for metaphorical pictures.
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Lisa46


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Feb 28 @ 9:22PM
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nice work
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DarkDesires99

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Feb 28 @ 10:05PM
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Good stuff it makes you think.
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xdcfx

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Feb 28 @ 10:12PM
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Wow. I really enjoyed that, Its a shame you dont think of yourself as a poet. I believe you have a talent, that you have not learned yet to embrace. A picture tells a thousand stories, but to paint a picture with such few words, is a work of art.
KUDOS to you. J.A.F.O.
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chocolatemilf

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Feb 28 @ 10:52PM
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The wind howls loudly as it roars around the house, I hear it beckoning me, D--e--b--r--a, D--e--b--r--a............ What is it that it wants?
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Zaftik

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Feb 28 @ 11:28PM
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Wow, Thanks everyone
So many kind words
I have just been having fun with these and I'm sure I'll do more (I can't seem to help myself).
Thanks again
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