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posted 2/28/2008 8:24:32 PM |
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  Zaftik

Since it seems to be Poetry and Story day here I guess I'll jump right in
So, I should start by explaining that I have never really thought of myself as the type to write poetry.
I like all kinds of poetry but never thought I was capable of writing any.
That is till I stumbled onto Xanga. You know, its like Myspace but not.
Anyway here is a sample then I will explain:

Sun bursts out from behind snow covered branches.
Blinding in it's beauty.
Momentarily warming the skin despite the temps.

Well, I never said it was brilliant

See, this all started when a gf of mine said I had to go on Xanga cause she was there, blah, blah, blah. So I did.
Needless to say she never posts anything on there but I thought it was kinda fun, so I put up a few things.

Anyhoo, they have this thing called pulse and you only get something like 125 spaces to leave a quick message to friends.

I have no idea why I did it but I started using it to describe things.
I found it a challenge to say what I wanted with the limited space.

And now I think of it as my Pulse Poetry.
Simple isn't it

So, here are a few more cause I knoooooow y'all really want to read it

Morning rituals_coffee_take a seat_a sip_look out the windows_towards the mountains_sun sneaks out between the peaks_beauty

Snowed yesterday, today there is a icy misty fog.
You look out the window and want to wipe away the frost.
There is none :)

Peace..the sound of it is gentle, soothing...the feel of it, like being wrapped in loving arms..the cost of it? Your heart.

Thanks for reading!!

Love, Laughter, Peace and Blessings!!
Z

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DarkKnightWalking

Feb 28 @ 8:27PM  



I like that.
NachoBaby

Feb 28 @ 9:21PM  
hmm you got more than a few more? Cuz I really WOULD like to read it! You have a knack for metaphorical pictures.
Lisa46

Feb 28 @ 9:22PM  
nice work
DarkDesires99

Feb 28 @ 10:05PM  
Good stuff it makes you think.
xdcfx

Feb 28 @ 10:12PM  
Wow. I really enjoyed that, Its a shame you dont think of yourself as a poet. I believe you have a talent, that you have not learned yet to embrace. A picture tells a thousand stories, but to paint a picture with such few words, is a work of art.

KUDOS to you. J.A.F.O.
chocolatemilf

Feb 28 @ 10:52PM  
The wind howls loudly as it roars around the house,
I hear it beckoning me, D--e--b--r--a, D--e--b--r--a............
What is it that it wants?
Zaftik

Feb 28 @ 11:28PM  
Wow, Thanks everyone

So many kind words

I have just been having fun with these and I'm sure I'll do more (I can't seem to help myself).

Thanks again

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