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Writer's Block Part Whatever

posted 10/30/2007 12:22:40 AM |

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MsHelle

[B]I wrote this damn story ages ago and still haven't found a satisfactory way to continue - any suggestions??[/B]

After landing at Atlanta airport, I duck into the Ladies Restroom to remove my panties and make sure my skirt is loose enough to be pulled up my hips. Satisfied that all is in order, I rush down to baggage claim to meet you. I'm rewarded with a big kiss and hug with and the feeling of the beginnings of a hard cock.

After getting my bag, we head for parking garage. We talk about how things are going, what we are going to do and make general polite conversation until we reach the car. As you open the boot of the car, I make the comment of "I'm not wearing any panties. Wanna fuck??"

You waste no time in trying to verify if what i say is true. Luckily you've parked in a secluded area of the garage, and push me back against the car and slide your hand down my skirt. You don't feel the outline of panties and pull my skirt up by the hem. You slide your fingers over my pussy lips and I groan. You tease my clit and slide into the slit. Your finger slides easily into my pussy and i spread my legs for more. I stroke the outline of your cock, wondering how you will taste in my mouth.

I unzip your pants and slide your cock out. It's as wonderful as you have told me and very hard with need. A little drop of pre-cum is on the tip. I strain to lick it off as you work my pussy. "Please" I beg to you "Let me suck your cock". We find a position where you can play with my pussy while i suck your cock, you leaning against the car while i'm bent over with my ass in the air and your hand cupping my ass with fingers in my pussy.

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borachone

Oct 30 @ 12:50AM

Use your imagination or draw on a few fantasies and continue this is gettin' hawt

slohand_47

Oct 31 @ 2:18AM

Many writers when blocked will create the scene in real life to better visualize how their story will play out.

Friday afternoon is good for me......

aspiringwriter

Jan 21 @ 1:39AM

One writer whose advice I've read, says to keep each paragraph to just one acting person. So, you could split the last sentence of paragraph 2 into a a new paragraph and lengthen there. Also, before you go to the "Please" I beg to you in the final paragraph, (which you drop the 'to' out of) you should increase the tension. More teasing and dirty talk.
The same author (whose name I can't remember and whose web-site I can't find again) reminds that men like details. The more details the better (so color of skirt, is it split up the middle, etc. No details are too small) where as women tend to (and this is just a generalization) be more interested in emotional build-up.
Anyway, I recognize this post is quite old, and you may have already finished the piece. If you haven't maybe that would help.
slohand is quite right, most like to draw from personal experience. It works well.

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