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posted 8/1/2007 11:40:48 AM |
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  Ashinatrix

It’s about never going numb….
Never getting too comfortable….
Never giving up.

It’s a firm grip in an unstable world….
A bond so deep you no longer fear death….
A trust that calms from deep within.

A reminder that you are alive…
You do exist…..
And now is the time.

So close your eyes….
Take a deep breath….
And just let go.

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Pudge2you

Aug 1 @ 11:51AM  
Birds do it... Bees do it... Perhaps even Ash is doing it?....
TattooedRawkStar

Aug 1 @ 1:08PM  
Fuckin' HAWT.
NachoBaby

Aug 1 @ 1:13PM  
I love that moment when, reduced to pure animal, nothing else matters but the moment.
maggiemae1969

Aug 1 @ 1:32PM  
thats pretty ........
Ashinatrix

Aug 1 @ 1:48PM  
I just love seeing the way people interpret my poetry........
mrknowuwell

Aug 1 @ 2:30PM  
Its like a Rorschach test...I see a .......
Ewe_Wish

Aug 1 @ 4:21PM  
Well could it possibly be about losing someone you love and trying to deal with it? I'm not sure but that is how i took it, but i think people tend to percieve other peoples poetry with what is going on in thier own lives.

jezzarae

Aug 1 @ 4:42PM  
The poem could be talking about many things I think for me though I thought about never becoming complacent in this world always reach out for more in life.
padreroyalataol

Aug 1 @ 5:29PM  
A kudo for the poem, but I have no idea where your thoughts come from.
"let go and let God" ? maybe al-anon? (just a joke ;_^)
Anyway I liked your poem,
take care,
Richard
Ashinatrix

Aug 1 @ 7:28PM  
Seeeeee!!! That's what I love about poetry....it can be seen so many different ways by different people....

Oh and Dayna.....it's ok.....
we're even
kozmik_wave

Aug 1 @ 8:46PM  
To me it sounds like thoughts and feelings about submissiveness...and your love for it, even without the picture it would still seem that way.

spot on? (as the say across the pond)
Ashinatrix

Aug 1 @ 8:50PM  
To me it sounds like thoughts and feelings about submissiveness...and your love for it, even without the picture it would still seem that way.
Funny you should say that.....considering I changed to pic to see if it would illicit another interpretation....
borty293

Aug 2 @ 5:30AM  
Gawd...I lubs you Ash...

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