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posted 9/8/2006 12:34:08 PM |
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i know its not sexually oriented

Promises broken for my heart to see
A Pretty made up face, a lost hope
A smile, a grin, and a tear that cannot be
Seen in this hopeful dream, is it real? Nope

It is nothing but fancy, I know this now
I see him laugh and remember light dreams
In his arms a sense of peace. But, why? How?
I don’t understand is it what it seems??

It can’t be. its not possible. I know
There is nothing in this ‘tween. Not here not
Now. I know one must reap what the sow
But all I want is peace of mind I sought

So I will paint my portrait all pretty and
Fine. And pretend everything is okay
Common sense isn’t that, it’s just a dream
So keep on walking and don’t turn back

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Dominus

Sep 8 @ 2:36PM  
Nice...very lyrical.
needsomenow789

Sep 8 @ 7:45PM  
Hi Archangel
Nice work honey your poems are beautuful
I also write poetry but of cource your would not think so by looking at my pictures, but i'm not as bad as i am made up to be.
Take care and good luck with your writing
canuhelpme258

Sep 9 @ 12:05AM  
We need stuff that's not sexually oriented. I think a lot of us are taking ourselves to seriously. I like it, good poem! I give you three !
ranger177

Sep 10 @ 7:15PM  
Nicely done. very nice rhyme, rhythm and use of imeagery to get set the mood of the poem.
kianwoo

Oct 13 @ 12:14AM  
nice one. what else to be said ... well all feelings can not be expresed by words .. u need emotions too ...

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